This was like 90% "Your sentences are very long let me try to make this easier to parse", 5% "What are you trying to accomplish here and are you sure this is the best way to do it?", 4% "Can we trim this redundant word please?" and 1% stet, all amiably sorted.
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Date: 2020-06-30 03:09 am (UTC)