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([personal profile] kiya Jul. 12th, 2002 04:06 am)
And lots of that is thanks to [livejournal.com profile] lstone talking to me about working through weird bits of combat so I could find a way for this sequence to actually be plausible. Yay Logan.

. . .

And now 1429, and I think I'm done with this chapter, which is a new record, at least for this project; 3665 words in three days. I need to prod at bits of it before sending it to [livejournal.com profile] brooksmoses, though; I'm not sure I'm happy with this bit of dialogue.

And I know how the next chapter starts; I think I'll write a little on that so I don't get chapter-break stuck.

*edits previous chapter to add five words*

3672 final on eighteen, after a little tweak with the assistance of [livejournal.com profile] oneironaut and [livejournal.com profile] lstone again. Yay all of us.

And 246 more on nineteen, making 1682 for today.

From: [identity profile] nex0s.livejournal.com

dialogue


the best advice i have ever read about writing dialogue (and who knows, you may have heard this before) is to read all of your dialogue outloud. preferably with other's doing the other parts of the dialogue.

nice work! lots of words are good :)
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